50 Word Thursday #56 – The Results

Hi All,

Thanks to all that contributed last week and this week it’s Kristian turn again and you can check out his post on his blog.  So let’s recap last weeks adventures.

The Rules:

  • Find the muse within the photo or line provided and follow where it leads. It can be a story, anecdote, poem. Anything!
  • The Story must be between 50 and 250 words, in 50 word increments. (so 50, 100, 150, 200 or 250 words)
  • Link back to this post with the tag 50WordThurs so that everyone can find it, or post your response in the comments below.

Here’s the picture:


And the words:

“Miss Tonks, the weakest, had been persuaded to go on a raiding mission,” – Miss Tonks Turns to Crime – MC Beaton

And here are the submissions for this week:

Tammy from God Inspired Art & Quotes

Miss Tonks, the weakest, was persuaded to go on a raiding mission. It was 5:30 in the morning and the sun didn’t came out of her chamber as yet. “Are you sure this….this….this…phew! Is a good idea?” Knees wept below her weakly breathing harshly.
“A one minute walk from the hall to the benches and you’re tired already?” Mia responded sternly watching down at her colleague. She continued, “We’re on a mission and people’s life’s are on the line. You need to be strong. If you wish to discontinue, have a sit on the bench.”
“Ah! Why are you making this so hard on me?” Raising up.
“In or out?” Beginning to move forward. “In.”
“That’s the spirit.”
“I’ll thank you for this therapy when I retire! I promise you.”

Violet from Thru Violet’s Lentz

Sadje from Keep it Alive

Kristian from Tales from the mind of Kristian

And here’s my submission for the week:

Miss Tonks, the weakest, may have been persuaded to go on a raiding mission but it wasn’t going to go the way they insisted.  She had been directed by toffy nosed Tracey not to return until she had Skip’s underwear in hand, Skip being the local hunk on the football team.  Miss Tonks had not even bothered to blink at the command.

Dutifully she had walked to Skip’s house and knocked on the door.  When Skip answered she had told him Tracey’s demand and the consequences of failure.  Skip had smiled, headed upstairs and returned with his briefs.

Tracey had gushed when she received them and told Miss Tonks she could accompany them to the movies after all.

Miss Tonks had smiled, sorry but she would have to decline.  Skip was taking her on a date.  He thought she was cute and he wanted her help in picked new underwear.

© Deb Whittam 2020


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Deb Whittam

With a keen interest in travel, photography, sports and writing I hope to encourage discussions on how culture has impacted on society in the 21st Century.

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